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2007-12-19 11:48 |
学习语文除了文法正确,还须向更佳的境界挑战。请大家细看以下这则文章,看哪里可以改进。
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Does the Best Exist?
There is no doubt that everyone takes delight in doing ‘the best’, but does the best exist?
From my point of view, the term ‘best’is not applicable to life in many cases. For instance, the records of sports competitions have been broken every now and then, and there seems to be no limits. For another example, you watched a performance, like dancing. You supposed that it was splendid, but you might never be so sure that you would not be seeing any better ones.
As a matter of fact, I would rather put ‘the best’ in a relative system than an absolute one. I have always said that I am striving to be ‘the best’, which means that I am putting efforts to enhance my personal qualifications in order to become a better individual than the previous time. Should an absolutely ‘best’ model of mine exist, I would never improve any further once it is achieved. Suppose that I got a first place in the last examination, and people around me all complimented my feat as ‘the best’, does it necessarily mean that I need no improvement? On the contrary, I will have to struggle even harder to be better so as to retain the lead, or others will overtake me the next time. As long as competition prevails, there will never be a ‘best’. So given that I am confident, hard-working and persevering, I should do better to win a relative ‘best’. For this reason, I particularly appreciate the advertisement of Philips: “Lets's make things better.”
Although I have come to a point that it is not possible to refer to anything as ‘the best’, there may still be a ‘best’in one's heart. When we talk about a devoted couple who are deeply in love, we tend to remark that each one is the‘best’to the other. However, we are also aware that there may be somebody who is able to be a better companion, but he/she simply does not have the capability to look for the better one. Suppose a boy meets a really good girl, will he break with her just because she is not the best? If he were looking for a better one all the time, wouldn't it be a waste of time? As long as the girl is suitable for him, in his heart she is the best though the possibility of better ones still exists. In cases like marriage, a considerate and tolerant attitude is crucial, since no one is perfect. If you think of one's merit as natural and his drawback as unbearable, then he/she will be valueless in your eyes. On the contrary, provided that you regard his/her virtue as precious and his/her fault as occasional, then he/she will rightly be the ‘best’ in your heart.
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Does the Best Exist? (revised version)
It goes without saying that everyone takes delight in doing ‘the best’, but does ‘the best’ exist?
To me, the term‘the best’does not often exist in real life. For instance, sports records have been broken from time to time, and there is no limit to record breaking. Another example is watching a performance like dancing. Supposing what you had watched was splendid, but you might never be so sure that you would not see better ones.
Personally, I would like to put ‘the best’ in a relative position rather than regard it as an absolute condition. If I say I strive to be the best, I may mean I am making efforts to enhance my personal qualifications to become a ‘better’ individual than before. Should the concept of 'the best' be imposed, I would never improve any further. Supposing that I got the first place in an examination and people around me complimented my feat as ‘the best’, does it mean that I need no further improvement? No, of course not! I have to work even harder to be better so as to retain the lead or others may overtake me one day. No wonder, the advertisement of Philips says: “Let's make things better”, I could not agree more.
Although it is not possible to refer to an effort as ‘the best’, such a notion still exists in one's mind. For example, we tend to describe a deeply devoted couple as ‘the best’ for each other. However, there may be someone better who has not turned up yet. If she does turn up, will he break with the wife because she is not the best? If he were looking for ‘the best’ one all the time, wouldn't it be a waste of time? Hence, as long as the girl is suitable, she is ‘the best’ to him though the possibility of a better one still exists. In cases like marriage, therefore, it is vital to be tolerant and considerate by regarding the spouse's virtues as precious and his or her drawbacks as transient; then he or she will be treated as ‘the best’. |
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